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BLOG ENTRY #13 March 24, 2010

Filed under: Uncategorized — bartlebaughlesliebhzp @ 2:42 pm

After you combine your 3 papers or completed the first half of your novel/creative work, discuss how you created a cohesive reading experience for your audience. For example, what major changes did you need to make after combining the papers? What most needs editing at this point? Where will you go from here?

-          After combining my three sections together, I needed to make sure it flowed like it should. I did this by using transitioning sentences and by leaving the reader hooked by my last sentence. By doing this, it keeps the reader reading to the very last page of my journal article. I think the introduction needs more editing at this point. I found that I need to add some things to it, explain more, and also to give it a more hooked feeling. From here I will edit my introduction, keeping in mind the things mentioned above, and I will continue with the results part of the project. I am excited to keep going. I know things will start to fall into place better, and I already see it happening now.

 

One Response to “BLOG ENTRY #13”

  1. you seem to have such a good idea as to where you’ll be going with this topic and what you’ll be doing! i wish i was this confident you lucky duck :)
    (BTW i’ve been trying to post my blog 13 for the past day a half and it always deletes itself bahhh)


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